Alright man, the bass sounds much better! And so does the main lead!! xD
Much better pick for this song man, thumbs up. :)
You really improved this, and im happy you did xD
+ the volume mastering is better in this song aswell = awesome :D
I dont have lots to complain man, keep it up!
Btw, ironicly, i have also a new WiP. Heres the link
Thanks so much, man! I am very glad that my changes turned out to be improvements! That really does make me very happy to hear. I'll check out your new wip too! Thanks again man, I appreciate it! God bless!
Pretty nice work you've done so far!
I like the sound you used around the start it made the song seem very upbeat. The bass was hard too, which is good. I would recommend maybe a tad smoother one though for this type of song, i mean, yours sounds untuned, you know? Rough even. Same hardness, just a tad smoother, it would make the song sound.. more pleasant i guess xD
The main lead was good too!
The only thing though was that it was at a pretty high octave.. It sounded like somekind of 'screaching' or something. Maybe lower the octave or try another lead.
Other then that, its really good! Keep it up man! :D
Thanks for the review man! I appreciate the feedback a lot. I'll keep those things in mind as I continue to make this song. Again thanks for the response, I'm glad you like the song! God bless!
Doesn't sound so much like Hardstyle..
Hey man, i saw that you favorited my Voltage remix, so i checked you out :)
So, i see the sounds are 'HardStyle Appropriate' The melody at the beginning was more of an up beat techno. It sounded way to empty to be hardstyle. Although again, i must admit the sounds were nice, the melody must have more of a 'minor-ish' thing to it and has to sound a bit 'scary-ish' at times, know what i mean? You did it pretty well at the piano part.
Make sure you have some FX in there too, eh? Like sweeps and acid sounds. Try getting VEC2 or VEC3 (Vengeance Essential ClubSounds.). Torrent it.
The bassline must also be nice and hard..... ;)
So basically, find some more sounds to add to your track. Like epic pads and whatnot. Keep it up though! Its still a Work in Progress, right? :D
Yes, I know what you mean ^^
Awesomely useful review, thanks very much! :D
Not much to say, other then its awesome!
This is much better then the first wip, no doubt. I also really liked to auto tune! It made your voice sound more robotic-ish and blended pretty good with the song, could be a tad better in some casses but, its much better then it was. Oh, can you send me a link for the auto tune btw? That would be helpful for me xD
I actually didn't believe that you were going to take the time to go to the woods man, i was thinking about it this morning, i thought we'd hear some birds cherping and some animal sound effects in the backround! xD
The effort was muchly appreciated, considering that you sounded more confident. I did hear that you holded your note in some parts where it threw me off a bit. What i usally do is play the bassline loudly and the main melody soflty and then record my voice as it plays, so i always know if im offbeat or not.
Other than that, im pretty darn impressed! :D
Good luck with the rest man.
Thanks! I love the autotune robot sound, it's awesome! I'll send you a link. Oh, and about the off-beat vocal stuff, I fixed that for the next version! So don't worry about it. It's a lot better now, trust me. Yes, I really did go into the woods! Keep listening and thanks again! God bless!
Hey, sounds really good man.
Now for the start. I felt like i had to listen to it twice to kind of understand the melody, i was expecting song longer notes around 0:02 - 0:03-ish. Although understand it was Happy Hardcore (which is sick ass music) I didn't feel the flow as much as it could have. get what im saying?
The build up, snare roll thing you had going on there was great! It whent really good with the rest, the only thing though was it sounded like it had a couple hits that weren't suposed to be there. The glitchy-ness was good , but just a tad off, around 0:14 - 0:16-ish. Just a tad though. (Sorry for being so harsh)
After that was that Dance lead, that sounded very good aswell because it really caught my attention, i recommend that you turn it down just a tiny, tiny, tiny bit, and get that strong ass bass kickin' in there :)
**But im listening out of my speakers cause my headphones broke so i could be wrong about that last paragraph.
The 'Tell your friends' made me laughhh, hahaha! I loved it!
Nothing else to say after that, the sequence was pro! Nothing wrong with it to my ears!
Keep it up bud!
5/5 10/10 (cause i love you... <3)
Wow, thank you for the awesome input! Just what I was looking for! As I continue to make the song I will continue to look back at the things you have mentioned to see what I can fix or change. Don't worry, you certainly weren't too harsh. Glad you liked the "tell your friends" part! It's a sound clip from one of the greatest movies of all time! But that's for another time, haha. Again, thanks a ton for the amazing amount of great feedback! God bless!
I think i should review this, if i haven't already, cause i think i owe you.
I love your song insanely!
The start melody is just .. Wonderful!
I mean really, when i first listened to this i knew i had to remix it.
Thank you once more for shouting me out in the description, i really appreciate it! :)
5/5x3 10/10, fav, download. :)
Thanks man! I'm really glad that you like the song and the melody, melody is my main focus. I LOVE your remix. I think I like it more than my version! Thanks so much for remixing it! For anyone reading this, check out the remix now!!! It's awesome! Thanks for the high ratings, man! I will continue to support your amazing remix. God bless!
Good stuff. Can't wait for the full version, ill be keeping an eye on you ;)
Must be finished!
This shit a crazy good.
You have to finish this man, right when im getting into it, it stops.
if you do do the rest, i'd say bring back that sick ass melody to had going on there. Please and thank you. ;)
YES! YES! YES!
Woot! Love it! So unique and awesome!
I also love the crazed hihats!
Good job on this one maiinnn! XD
Really good job on this one maaiinnnnn ! Loved it all the way thru!
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