Doesn't sound so much like Hardstyle..
Hey man, i saw that you favorited my Voltage remix, so i checked you out :)
So, i see the sounds are 'HardStyle Appropriate' The melody at the beginning was more of an up beat techno. It sounded way to empty to be hardstyle. Although again, i must admit the sounds were nice, the melody must have more of a 'minor-ish' thing to it and has to sound a bit 'scary-ish' at times, know what i mean? You did it pretty well at the piano part.
Make sure you have some FX in there too, eh? Like sweeps and acid sounds. Try getting VEC2 or VEC3 (Vengeance Essential ClubSounds.). Torrent it.
The bassline must also be nice and hard..... ;)
So basically, find some more sounds to add to your track. Like epic pads and whatnot. Keep it up though! Its still a Work in Progress, right? :D
Beats4Beets