Hey i'd like to say , welcome back! You definitely still have your game, no rusty-ness detected.
I think this wip, is well... a wip xD but also has potential of been a gooood song!
I found that this one had less 'perky/happiness' to it, which isn't a bad thing at all and your still rocking the 3x osc, but especially with the intro and everything.
I guess why im saying this, must be because the way you used the notes in the beginning. They threw me off a little bit because it seemed like perhaps they didn't follow the scale as well as they could. I wouldn't say they were off tune, but like, maybe used a the wrong times. See what im saying here? xD
Just a liiiitle odd sounding. Hope that helps hahahah, sorry for not being better at explaining things xD
Another then that, rock on! Good job on this one, keep it up!
Thanks man! I always appreciate your reviews a lot! And I am very glad that you overall liked it. I think I know what you mean about the notes, but dude, like I have said before, I really know nothing about music, I just make things how I like to hear them and by however I am inspired at the time! But honestly I'm sure your right! And yeah, this one wasn't as happy like the others because I wanted to try an older style I hadn't done in a while. But thanks a ton for your support! God bless you man!
Ill start by saying, you did an amazing job on this song!
Did you improve? I think the answer's yes! Omg, this song is excellent, i dont know where to start!
How bout the kick, did you make that over 3x osc again?! Your getting good at that xD
What about your other synths? Made 'em? Its pro man.
Btw, you took my advice! You added piano like i said xD
I also loved how you mixed the violins at the end, to smoothly rest into what was the beggining. Very chill and appropriate for the fall :)
Your becoming more then what i expected, honestly! Keep it up!
PS: Sorry for not uploading very much stuff. I finished 2 songs but im not sure if ill upload.. Ill think about it :)
Thank you man! I am so glad that you like it! Yes, all the synths are totally 3sOsc. All of em! And I definately did take your advice on the piano, and I think it turned out really well. I really appreciate all the awesome comments you have man! Keep listening and reviewing my friend! God bless!
Wow, its changed!
Dude, this song.. It just, isn't the same song as the first wip. But in a good way overall! xD
I think letting to intro last with the violins was a good idea and is the speed slower in the version? I dont know.. Seems like it.
and btw, whats is UP with the random voice samples in all your songs?! xD
Theres weirdly awesome. xD
but i dont have much to say afterward, the break sounds good and your getting better at mastering too! :D
Keep it up man!
As for the finale.. Hm.. How bout bringing back to intro with some piano or something? Thats what id do. xD
Anyways good luck!
Thanks man! I appreciate your review! And the speed in this song is faster than the other one. And I'm glad you like the random vocal samples, lol! And don't worry, because the final does have piano, but not for the intro. Again, thanks a bunch for reviewing man, I always love getting your reviews! God bless!
Hey man, im back! Sorry for not getting to this very quickly.. My bad..:\
BUT, i have GOOD NEWS!
THIS SONG IS AWESOME! xD
The intro was godly, it caught my attention instantly! The violin mixed with a fading in lead... A ghjhtjhrigiefkwoqkd!
The only thing i'd double check would be the straight synth coming in right after that, kind of threw me off, but i deffinitely caught on xD
The rest is awesome man, keep it up, this is gonna be a great song man! xD
PS: Im about to PM you NOW about the sweep in my latest song! ^^'
Thanks so much!! This made me very happy to read! I totally agree about the synth in the beginning, maybe I will make it a litlle less abrupt. But seriously man, thanks a ton for the amazing review! I always appreciate it! And thanks for PMing me! God bless!
Alright, so i guess this is a preview too xD
But yeah, i agree wtih everything DAxMAN said, this is freakin awesome!
Why do i get such a 80s music vibe from you? I only listend to this and your newest track, but i dont know..
Anyhow, this is awesome, keep it up and lemme know when everything's done. :D
I've been trying to find "my sound", these past two years, all my songs pretty much sound all different except for these two latest ones; I've enjoyed making these and believe I've finally found my sound, xD "heavy sidechain/80s/clubdance" xD
thanks a ton for the review!
Hey man, you reviewed my song 'End of time', i dunno if you wanted me to check this out, or your other song, i'll probably do both xD
But yeah man, you have some major skills! Like i was really expecting less! (no offense) You deserve some attention man.
I really have nothing to critisize here, keep it up!
Ill be expecting a PM when your done everything. xD
I was hoping you'd review only this one, but it's always fun to read reviews anyway. :)
Thanks a lot man, nice to be apprecieated. XD
The song is pretty much done now, finished it yesterday(3:41 track :)), but because of my messy structure (i'm used to it) it's becoming a mastering nightmare, the first half(this) sounds okay, but the rest is soo messy it's unbeliveable, hah. :p
Ofc, i'll try and finish this asap.
Thanks a ton for the review!
Man. I've used 3xOcs before, for kicks, sweeps and basses. But you did an awesome job with this one man. It sounds like a detuned syth of a trumpet or something, i dont know xD
But yeah, the movie question, i have no idea man, i suck trivia.
All i can say right now is to keep up the work man!
Haha, I'm glad you like it! Well, here's a hint, the movie was a straight-to-television sci fi channel original, so I seriously doubt you ever saw it, lol! You know, the kind of movie some guy made with some fake blood and a 20 dollar bill. Thanks for the reviwe, and God bless!
Good stuff ! :D
Hey man, i must say, i really enjoyed this track! Good tune for closing summer and I really enjoy that mind blowing fast upbeat style you have! Not much to complain about here, unless we went really technical, but i dont think its necessary xD
The overal song its really good man, keep it up! Hope it makes the top scoring!
Thank you so much man! I really appreciate it a lot, and I'm glad that you like the speed. Thanks so much for all your reviews! I look forward to more of your tunes! God bless!
Alright man, the bass sounds much better! And so does the main lead!! xD
Much better pick for this song man, thumbs up. :)
You really improved this, and im happy you did xD
+ the volume mastering is better in this song aswell = awesome :D
I dont have lots to complain man, keep it up!
Btw, ironicly, i have also a new WiP. Heres the link
Thanks so much, man! I am very glad that my changes turned out to be improvements! That really does make me very happy to hear. I'll check out your new wip too! Thanks again man, I appreciate it! God bless!
Pretty nice work you've done so far!
I like the sound you used around the start it made the song seem very upbeat. The bass was hard too, which is good. I would recommend maybe a tad smoother one though for this type of song, i mean, yours sounds untuned, you know? Rough even. Same hardness, just a tad smoother, it would make the song sound.. more pleasant i guess xD
The main lead was good too!
The only thing though was that it was at a pretty high octave.. It sounded like somekind of 'screaching' or something. Maybe lower the octave or try another lead.
Other then that, its really good! Keep it up man! :D
Thanks for the review man! I appreciate the feedback a lot. I'll keep those things in mind as I continue to make this song. Again thanks for the response, I'm glad you like the song! God bless!
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